Hi Bloggers Charlotte here,
This week we made are own maori legends on how something was discovered by the maori. My myth was how the maori discovered a whale's
The myth is about a girl called Moana and her family her dad is the chief of the island and there running out of fish on the island meanwhile up in the sky the sky father ahi had been sending a strange type of animal to the island.
Have a look at my myth it is on the last slide of the presentation. So did you like it? Do you think I could of changed anything? Okay time to go bye bloggers.
Kia ora Charlotte, your legend is a great piece of writing. I particularly like how you have thought about our writing rubric. I can see that you have added alliteration, a simile and you have put a lot of detail into your characters. Well done! Next time, don't forget to give names a capital letter.
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