Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
Hi I am Charlotte,
I am doing writing, we have to choose an animal of our choice you may see that I have chosen a dolphin, In my slide you will find out interesting and cool facts about dolphins, Have you ever researched a animal
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Stunning work Charlotte, I am really impressed with how you have followed the instructions to create such an informative information report. Thank you for sharing this with us. Perhaps next time you could come up with a catchy title to give it. Keep up the great blogging :)
ReplyDeleteHi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteI really loved your dolphin slide show, it is obvious how much effort you have put into it. Super work including a video on the sounds they make. That was my favourite part!